It is great for you to analyze both sides of the Bad News game, for what it already good at and what it can improve. It’s impressive to see your practice and solid effort on making a sketchnote, you have drawn a lot of shapes and objects. Your critical thinking about the sketchnote such as its disadvantage when it comes to long length of text note and messages is inspirational. If there’s more space you can improve, I suggest that you can go deeper into the specific details how the multimedia principles were followed in the game or our course, then that will be fantastic!